We actually thought of another story. The story is similar to like avatar, earth bender, water bender and fire bender etc. We even searched for some references from the net on how the fire starts. We pitched this idea to the mentor also. He said that if we want to do the fire effect, the surrounding must be dim in order to make the fire look realistic.We decided to stick to the Game Mode story but we tried to modify a bit such that there will be more CGI. Then I helped drew the storyboard with Kalyn while the rest tried to find models in the internet and also tried to model the object. After finishing our storyboard, we pitch the story to our mentor again about our finalized idea.
The feedback that we got :
- The introduction must elaborate more as it is too abrupt.
- Example : Showing the girl trying to find food and shouting for help.
- Make sure if want to do the effect, we must try our best to make it look realistic as possible.
- Our setting is where there is no people at all. It is an abandoned and an isolated place, so when we film, make sure there is no sight of human beings except for the main character.
- There is one scene where we need to do a tilt from a high angle shot. Our mentor said that tilting is difficult for us to matchmove so we need to change the way we film or we can just try to solve the problem by test shooting the scene first.
That was the feedback given from our mentor. We searched for some references on the net. Our model in the film will be like a tentacle robot. It looks like Dr Octopus' tentacles but without the human body.
the red light will be the eye for the tentacle bot.
We discussed what we will be doing the next day which is to finish up the leica reel and also to head down to our shooting area to see whether it is suitable for the film.
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